<?xml version="1.0" encoding="utf-8"?><rss version="2.0"
	xmlns:content="http://purl.org/rss/1.0/modules/content/"
	xmlns:dc="http://purl.org/dc/elements/1.1/"
	xmlns:atom="http://www.w3.org/2005/Atom"
	xmlns:sy="http://purl.org/rss/1.0/modules/syndication/"
		>
<channel>
	<title>Comments on: The New Media Reader &#8211; Correct Us!</title>
	<atom:link href="http://grandtextauto.org/2008/04/02/the-new-media-reader-correct-us/feed/" rel="self" type="application/rss+xml" />
	<link>http://grandtextauto.org/2008/04/02/the-new-media-reader-correct-us/</link>
	<description>A group blog about computer narrative, games, poetry, and art.</description>
	<lastBuildDate>Thu, 30 Sep 2010 22:43:57 +0000</lastBuildDate>
	<sy:updatePeriod>hourly</sy:updatePeriod>
	<sy:updateFrequency>1</sy:updateFrequency>
	<generator>http://wordpress.org/?v=3.1.2</generator>
	<item>
		<title>By: noah</title>
		<link>http://grandtextauto.org/2008/04/02/the-new-media-reader-correct-us/comment-page-1/#comment-235376</link>
		<dc:creator>noah</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Mon, 14 Apr 2008 00:55:41 +0000</pubDate>
		<guid isPermaLink="false">http://grandtextauto.org/2008/04/02/the-new-media-reader-correct-us/#comment-235376</guid>
		<description>Okay, Matt was the only one to send us a change by this means. We agree with his second suggestion (though the first and third are ones where we&#039;ll have to agree to disagree). He&#039;ll be given a thanks in the new printing&#039;s acknowledgments.

For those who are curious, here are some other corrections identified for the new printing:

Back of the book:
The list of chapters running down the left side is in the wrong order. Currently it reads: 07 Engelbart, 08 Sutherland, 09 Burroughs. It should read: 07 Burroughs, 08 Engelbart, 09 Sutherland.

Chapter 3 (pages 55 and 57): 
The words &quot;this connection&quot; should I read &quot;this connexion&quot;. (A mistaken partial regularization in the first printing.)

Chapter 21 (page 331):
The first note needs an additional capital letter, period, and square bracket. It currently reads: &quot;[included in this volume (◊11)&quot;. It should read: &quot;[Included in this volume (◊11).]&quot;.

Chapter 38 (pages 565-573):
The timeline (at the top of the odd numbered pages) is missing its line.

Chapter 44 (page 643):
The text &quot;Hershman&#039;s 1989-1990 Deep Contact&quot; should be changed so the date range is &quot;1984-1989&quot;.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Okay, Matt was the only one to send us a change by this means. We agree with his second suggestion (though the first and third are ones where we&#8217;ll have to agree to disagree). He&#8217;ll be given a thanks in the new printing&#8217;s acknowledgments.</p>
<p>For those who are curious, here are some other corrections identified for the new printing:</p>
<p>Back of the book:<br />
The list of chapters running down the left side is in the wrong order. Currently it reads: 07 Engelbart, 08 Sutherland, 09 Burroughs. It should read: 07 Burroughs, 08 Engelbart, 09 Sutherland.</p>
<p>Chapter 3 (pages 55 and 57):<br />
The words &#8220;this connection&#8221; should I read &#8220;this connexion&#8221;. (A mistaken partial regularization in the first printing.)</p>
<p>Chapter 21 (page 331):<br />
The first note needs an additional capital letter, period, and square bracket. It currently reads: &#8220;[included in this volume (◊11)". It should read: "[Included in this volume (◊11).]&#8220;.</p>
<p>Chapter 38 (pages 565-573):<br />
The timeline (at the top of the odd numbered pages) is missing its line.</p>
<p>Chapter 44 (page 643):<br />
The text &#8220;Hershman&#8217;s 1989-1990 Deep Contact&#8221; should be changed so the date range is &#8220;1984-1989&#8243;.</p>
]]></content:encoded>
	</item>
	<item>
		<title>By: Matt Volk</title>
		<link>http://grandtextauto.org/2008/04/02/the-new-media-reader-correct-us/comment-page-1/#comment-231520</link>
		<dc:creator>Matt Volk</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 08 Apr 2008 03:25:13 +0000</pubDate>
		<guid isPermaLink="false">http://grandtextauto.org/2008/04/02/the-new-media-reader-correct-us/#comment-231520</guid>
		<description>pg 277 paragraph 2 second line reads: there is an inherent structure to media technologically.  Baudrillard argues that media serve a social

-I think it should read: &quot;....media serve(s) a social....&quot;

pg 193 paragraph one line 2 reads: and used in so many contexts that it can be difficult figure out exactly what they were once

-I think it should read: &quot;....it can be difficult (to) figure out .....&quot;

pg 193 paragraph one line 4-5 reads: hollowly.  The idea this phrase brought to the foreground in the 1960s-- that media themselves overwhelm the importance of their &quot;content&quot;--is now....

-I think it should read: &quot;...that media (itself) overwhelm(s) the importance of (its) &quot;content&quot;....&quot;
(This last one might be too big of a change.)</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>pg 277 paragraph 2 second line reads: there is an inherent structure to media technologically.  Baudrillard argues that media serve a social</p>
<p>-I think it should read: &#8220;&#8230;.media serve(s) a social&#8230;.&#8221;</p>
<p>pg 193 paragraph one line 2 reads: and used in so many contexts that it can be difficult figure out exactly what they were once</p>
<p>-I think it should read: &#8220;&#8230;.it can be difficult (to) figure out &#8230;..&#8221;</p>
<p>pg 193 paragraph one line 4-5 reads: hollowly.  The idea this phrase brought to the foreground in the 1960s&#8211; that media themselves overwhelm the importance of their &#8220;content&#8221;&#8211;is now&#8230;.</p>
<p>-I think it should read: &#8220;&#8230;that media (itself) overwhelm(s) the importance of (its) &#8220;content&#8221;&#8230;.&#8221;<br />
(This last one might be too big of a change.)</p>
]]></content:encoded>
	</item>
</channel>
</rss>

