Noah, I just wanted to comment, as we start reading the second chapter, that I’m really enjoying reading your book collaboratively with many who are a part of Grand Text Auto. I’m not sure how useful I will be as an online reviewer, because the incremental upload of the book prevents me from getting the whole picture of your overall project. At best we seem to be nitpicking, as Doug Sery at MIT Press aptly predicted and as the interface and serial method of posting encourages. But I nevertheless love the experience of reading along with others who have commented and the many others who haven’t. Progressing through your book together with these others gives me the sense of being part of a reading community.



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