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	<title>Comments on: Lessons of Indigo Prophecy, part 2</title>
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		<title>By: Grand Text Auto &#187; Indigo Prophecy through Simon&#8217;s Eyes</title>
		<link>http://grandtextauto.org/2007/07/17/lessons-of-indigo-prophesy-part-2/comment-page-1/#comment-133873</link>
		<dc:creator>Grand Text Auto &#187; Indigo Prophecy through Simon&#8217;s Eyes</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 10 Oct 2007 04:52:18 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>[...]  			A lot has been mentioned on here about Indigo Prophecy already - by Andrew, by Noah (1 2), and by commenters who followed up those posts. 	I want to add two thin [...]</description>
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		<title>By: Luke</title>
		<link>http://grandtextauto.org/2007/07/17/lessons-of-indigo-prophesy-part-2/comment-page-1/#comment-121152</link>
		<dc:creator>Luke</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Mon, 20 Aug 2007 23:13:31 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>I&#039;ve only played the first 5 minutes of IP, but have played through the entire Longest Journey - derided justifiably in an earlier comment for being like every other adventure game. What really struck me about Longest Journey though, was something akin to Cage&#039;s &#039;revelation&#039; about the waking up scene in IP. In Journey, you start off in your run down apartment, have a chat with your neighbour in the lobby below, then head off to your shift at the cafe. You have conversations with your good friends, who tell you about yourself. These early scenes are meant to be introductory - and informative tutorial (both in terms of gameplay and backstory) before you head off to the &#039;real adventure&#039;. But after playing through dozens of hours of fantastical worlds, overly eccentric characters and cutesy companions, this &#039;intro&#039; was by far the most successful. Part of it was perhaps cultural - Being a young New Zealander I could identify with the small apartment and catching up with friends at a cafe. Part of it was realism - I forgave the graphics because it gave a good-enough impression of a real world scene, as opposed to a fantasy landscape with no real-world counterpart. Perhaps a conflict slowly interrupting a realistic daily rhythm would be a better first step in IF/gamedesign - rather than our usual cast of globe-trotting heroines and slug spewing hulks.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I&#8217;ve only played the first 5 minutes of IP, but have played through the entire Longest Journey &#8211; derided justifiably in an earlier comment for being like every other adventure game. What really struck me about Longest Journey though, was something akin to Cage&#8217;s &#8216;revelation&#8217; about the waking up scene in IP. In Journey, you start off in your run down apartment, have a chat with your neighbour in the lobby below, then head off to your shift at the cafe. You have conversations with your good friends, who tell you about yourself. These early scenes are meant to be introductory &#8211; and informative tutorial (both in terms of gameplay and backstory) before you head off to the &#8216;real adventure&#8217;. But after playing through dozens of hours of fantastical worlds, overly eccentric characters and cutesy companions, this &#8216;intro&#8217; was by far the most successful. Part of it was perhaps cultural &#8211; Being a young New Zealander I could identify with the small apartment and catching up with friends at a cafe. Part of it was realism &#8211; I forgave the graphics because it gave a good-enough impression of a real world scene, as opposed to a fantasy landscape with no real-world counterpart. Perhaps a conflict slowly interrupting a realistic daily rhythm would be a better first step in IF/gamedesign &#8211; rather than our usual cast of globe-trotting heroines and slug spewing hulks.</p>
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		<title>By: bored-n-tired</title>
		<link>http://grandtextauto.org/2007/07/17/lessons-of-indigo-prophesy-part-2/comment-page-1/#comment-119822</link>
		<dc:creator>bored-n-tired</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Mon, 23 Jul 2007 22:35:37 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>I feel that this game (even though flawed) is really detailed &#039;cause this is the only game that can have die from pills and drinking and that there is at least a decent story unlike BLACK which for me was a waste of my money and that there was at least some creativity and that even at a few parts the game wasn&#039;t repetive and sure I died a few times but I don&#039;t cry about to me this game maybe deserves a 3.5 out of 5.

P.S. who really doesn&#039;t know that drinking and popping pills can be fatal?</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I feel that this game (even though flawed) is really detailed &#8217;cause this is the only game that can have die from pills and drinking and that there is at least a decent story unlike BLACK which for me was a waste of my money and that there was at least some creativity and that even at a few parts the game wasn&#8217;t repetive and sure I died a few times but I don&#8217;t cry about to me this game maybe deserves a 3.5 out of 5.</p>
<p>P.S. who really doesn&#8217;t know that drinking and popping pills can be fatal?</p>
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		<title>By: Miral</title>
		<link>http://grandtextauto.org/2007/07/17/lessons-of-indigo-prophesy-part-2/comment-page-1/#comment-119701</link>
		<dc:creator>Miral</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 19 Jul 2007 20:25:29 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Actually, with that scene where you&#039;re being questioned and the Simon Says game gives you visions that make the cops more suspicious: if your mental health starts out high enough, you can actually &quot;pass&quot; all the Simon games and keep playing through.  That&#039;s usually what I try and do, since I&#039;m stubborn, and I think it fits the character better :)

I agree with everything else you were saying though.  A lot of the storyline got lost behind the Simon wheels, especially the frenetically paced ones.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Actually, with that scene where you&#8217;re being questioned and the Simon Says game gives you visions that make the cops more suspicious: if your mental health starts out high enough, you can actually &#8220;pass&#8221; all the Simon games and keep playing through.  That&#8217;s usually what I try and do, since I&#8217;m stubborn, and I think it fits the character better :)</p>
<p>I agree with everything else you were saying though.  A lot of the storyline got lost behind the Simon wheels, especially the frenetically paced ones.</p>
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		<title>By: Mike Rozak</title>
		<link>http://grandtextauto.org/2007/07/17/lessons-of-indigo-prophesy-part-2/comment-page-1/#comment-119543</link>
		<dc:creator>Mike Rozak</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 17 Jul 2007 22:09:13 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Noah wrote: Mike, I think the game is cheap enough now that it might be worth buying just for the first couple scenes. Unless you’re the kind of player that can’t stop until they get to the end, in which case you might want to weigh the choice more carefully.  Your “Choices III” is an interesting document. Have you used it to analyze any particular games or game designs? 

I have, but I haven&#039;t put the analysis all in one place. (It&#039;s scattered around may of the other articles I&#039;ve put up. I know I&#039;ve commented about choice w/regards to Oblivion, NWN2, AC2, WoW, EQ2.) Speaking of bargain bins, I picked up Broken Sword, the Angel of Death, to try it. I&#039;ve only gotten through the first small bit and was thinking about writing an article about how it fails as far &quot;choice&quot; in most respects. But I haven&#039;t had the time or inclination.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Noah wrote: Mike, I think the game is cheap enough now that it might be worth buying just for the first couple scenes. Unless you’re the kind of player that can’t stop until they get to the end, in which case you might want to weigh the choice more carefully.  Your “Choices III” is an interesting document. Have you used it to analyze any particular games or game designs? </p>
<p>I have, but I haven&#8217;t put the analysis all in one place. (It&#8217;s scattered around may of the other articles I&#8217;ve put up. I know I&#8217;ve commented about choice w/regards to Oblivion, NWN2, AC2, WoW, EQ2.) Speaking of bargain bins, I picked up Broken Sword, the Angel of Death, to try it. I&#8217;ve only gotten through the first small bit and was thinking about writing an article about how it fails as far &#8220;choice&#8221; in most respects. But I haven&#8217;t had the time or inclination.</p>
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		<title>By: breslin</title>
		<link>http://grandtextauto.org/2007/07/17/lessons-of-indigo-prophesy-part-2/comment-page-1/#comment-119539</link>
		<dc:creator>breslin</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 17 Jul 2007 21:25:58 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Your three-tier model can very broadly characterize successes and failures, and it comments upon the current state-of-the-art.

Your statements about the &quot;&#039;this is a problem&#039; level&quot; (story in interruption, or story in non-relation) are useful for figuring out why certain designs don&#039;t work, and by extension why other designs should be preferable.

Hopefully my comments about the successful match of story and gameplay illuminate not only how arcade games can have good stories (I was limiting myself to this only), but how &quot;the narrative presentation of the material game structure&quot; is essential to (or, equivalent to) the marriage of game and story. (So hopefully you won&#039;t relegate my thoughts to the second tier only.)

==

Of course I&#039;m making some simplifications: I&#039;ve described a situation where we have a given game structure, and a designer comes along and creatively presents it; he receives a sort-of game manifold and creatively interprets and presents each element as  storywise significant. What really happens in game design is not this neat two-stage affair, but something circular, where story and structure evolve simultaneously. Some germ of significance invariably comes before anything is put into code; there has to be a goal before there can be a design. Then as development proceeds, the game structure and the story/meaning mutually inform one another.

(One might well challenge whether structure and story can be properly understood to be two different things, except in those situations where the disjunct is the direct cause for the failure of the game (e.g., &quot;Simon&quot;-driven narrative).)</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Your three-tier model can very broadly characterize successes and failures, and it comments upon the current state-of-the-art.</p>
<p>Your statements about the &#8220;&#8216;this is a problem&#8217; level&#8221; (story in interruption, or story in non-relation) are useful for figuring out why certain designs don&#8217;t work, and by extension why other designs should be preferable.</p>
<p>Hopefully my comments about the successful match of story and gameplay illuminate not only how arcade games can have good stories (I was limiting myself to this only), but how &#8220;the narrative presentation of the material game structure&#8221; is essential to (or, equivalent to) the marriage of game and story. (So hopefully you won&#8217;t relegate my thoughts to the second tier only.)</p>
<p>==</p>
<p>Of course I&#8217;m making some simplifications: I&#8217;ve described a situation where we have a given game structure, and a designer comes along and creatively presents it; he receives a sort-of game manifold and creatively interprets and presents each element as  storywise significant. What really happens in game design is not this neat two-stage affair, but something circular, where story and structure evolve simultaneously. Some germ of significance invariably comes before anything is put into code; there has to be a goal before there can be a design. Then as development proceeds, the game structure and the story/meaning mutually inform one another.</p>
<p>(One might well challenge whether structure and story can be properly understood to be two different things, except in those situations where the disjunct is the direct cause for the failure of the game (e.g., &#8220;Simon&#8221;-driven narrative).)</p>
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		<title>By: Chris Lewis</title>
		<link>http://grandtextauto.org/2007/07/17/lessons-of-indigo-prophesy-part-2/comment-page-1/#comment-119538</link>
		<dc:creator>Chris Lewis</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 17 Jul 2007 21:23:59 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Noah: &quot;If he wanted to make an interactive drama, which is what I suspect, then the quantification elements should have gone away and (if possible) everything playable should have deepened our sense of his history, relationships, and role in the story.&quot;

Exactly. This is why the banal basketball game seemed to exist only to pad the game out. The whole framing of the event was to settle a score about some money the player had never even taken. I learnt nothing of Tyler or his history, just that he plays basketball, regardless of the freezing temperatures outside. I was able to take away far more from Tyler when he was waking up and getting dressed, which is one of the best scenes in the game.

I loathed the &quot;Simon Says&quot; games. QTE (quick time events) are used by game designers to express actions that cannot be properly enacted otherwise. Shenmue is a good usage of QTE, fighting mobsters with skill and precision, creating a vision of Ryu as an agile street fighter that was otherwise unattainable. Shenmue II also had the nonsense &quot;hey, actually DON&#039;T press it this time! But I&#039;ll let you work it out for yourself!&quot; QTE. I don&#039;t know what would drive designers to do this; other than some horrible realisation that, actually, QTEs aren&#039;t that varied.

The only times in Fahrenheit when they made sense was during Cage&#039;s descents into madness, where the surrounding environment was falling apart so quickly that a QTE didn&#039;t feel like it was pulling you out of the game world. I don&#039;t need to play Simon Says to shoot hoops. Some of the button-mashing at the end of the game was so obscene that I honestly wanted to complete the game just out of spite (see: rooftop fight).

Basing so much of the game around that mechanic smacks as a knee-jerk reaction to the commercial failure of the point-and-click adventure; that players need some sort of frustrating reflex game in order to feel properly immersed. I remember the tutorial at the beginning, where Cage asks plays to &quot;feel&quot; themselves opening the door. This was the only usage of the analogue sticks that even came close to making sense.

I purchased the first-person shooter FEAR over the weekend. The narrative in the game is a pretty light touch,  but it gives &lt;i&gt;just&lt;/i&gt; enough to allow the player to create their own narrative, even when they have absolutely no ability to affect the story. Maybe a bit like breslin was shooting at, everything I did was significant to me (open door-&gt;slow motion-&gt;fill enemies with shotgun lead-&gt;cackle triumphantly) and enough to make me feel like I am writing the story, when of course it&#039;s completely on-rails. I find it very hard to describe why, I think it&#039;s because the story is not delivered in a gameplay-&gt;cut-scene mechanic. The little girl on the cover appears in the game at random, but quite frequent, intervals, but never for very long. I feel like I am discovering something the game doesn&#039;t want me to know, through my dogged determination to kill everything in my path. It&#039;s a melding of gameplay and narrative which is very hard to describe, and I am sure was not created by design and just a lucky coincidence, but it is pretty much the opposite of the way Fahrenheit approached things, light-handed, unobtrusive, natural. I&#039;m filling in the sizeable blanks of the story myself. I hear it is about $20 in the US now.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Noah: &#8220;If he wanted to make an interactive drama, which is what I suspect, then the quantification elements should have gone away and (if possible) everything playable should have deepened our sense of his history, relationships, and role in the story.&#8221;</p>
<p>Exactly. This is why the banal basketball game seemed to exist only to pad the game out. The whole framing of the event was to settle a score about some money the player had never even taken. I learnt nothing of Tyler or his history, just that he plays basketball, regardless of the freezing temperatures outside. I was able to take away far more from Tyler when he was waking up and getting dressed, which is one of the best scenes in the game.</p>
<p>I loathed the &#8220;Simon Says&#8221; games. QTE (quick time events) are used by game designers to express actions that cannot be properly enacted otherwise. Shenmue is a good usage of QTE, fighting mobsters with skill and precision, creating a vision of Ryu as an agile street fighter that was otherwise unattainable. Shenmue II also had the nonsense &#8220;hey, actually DON&#8217;T press it this time! But I&#8217;ll let you work it out for yourself!&#8221; QTE. I don&#8217;t know what would drive designers to do this; other than some horrible realisation that, actually, QTEs aren&#8217;t that varied.</p>
<p>The only times in Fahrenheit when they made sense was during Cage&#8217;s descents into madness, where the surrounding environment was falling apart so quickly that a QTE didn&#8217;t feel like it was pulling you out of the game world. I don&#8217;t need to play Simon Says to shoot hoops. Some of the button-mashing at the end of the game was so obscene that I honestly wanted to complete the game just out of spite (see: rooftop fight).</p>
<p>Basing so much of the game around that mechanic smacks as a knee-jerk reaction to the commercial failure of the point-and-click adventure; that players need some sort of frustrating reflex game in order to feel properly immersed. I remember the tutorial at the beginning, where Cage asks plays to &#8220;feel&#8221; themselves opening the door. This was the only usage of the analogue sticks that even came close to making sense.</p>
<p>I purchased the first-person shooter FEAR over the weekend. The narrative in the game is a pretty light touch,  but it gives <i>just</i> enough to allow the player to create their own narrative, even when they have absolutely no ability to affect the story. Maybe a bit like breslin was shooting at, everything I did was significant to me (open door-&gt;slow motion-&gt;fill enemies with shotgun lead-&gt;cackle triumphantly) and enough to make me feel like I am writing the story, when of course it&#8217;s completely on-rails. I find it very hard to describe why, I think it&#8217;s because the story is not delivered in a gameplay-&gt;cut-scene mechanic. The little girl on the cover appears in the game at random, but quite frequent, intervals, but never for very long. I feel like I am discovering something the game doesn&#8217;t want me to know, through my dogged determination to kill everything in my path. It&#8217;s a melding of gameplay and narrative which is very hard to describe, and I am sure was not created by design and just a lucky coincidence, but it is pretty much the opposite of the way Fahrenheit approached things, light-handed, unobtrusive, natural. I&#8217;m filling in the sizeable blanks of the story myself. I hear it is about $20 in the US now.</p>
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		<title>By: noah</title>
		<link>http://grandtextauto.org/2007/07/17/lessons-of-indigo-prophesy-part-2/comment-page-1/#comment-119524</link>
		<dc:creator>noah</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 17 Jul 2007 17:51:47 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>breslin, I&#039;ve been thinking along the lines of a three-level model. 

At one level, which is basically an area of active research, the story itself is playable. How you play alters the shape of the story -- on the macro level, micro level, or both. Hitting both is, of course, the &lt;i&gt;Facade&lt;/i&gt; goal.

At a level that can be shipped for Christmas, the story is fixed, or has a small number of options -- but gameplay is a close fit with the story. This is the &lt;i&gt;Prince of Persia: The Sands of Time&lt;/i&gt; level, and I think it might also be the more successful one you&#039;re describing in your comment. You&#039;re playing actions that have significance within the story, not playing the story itself.

At the &quot;this is a problem&quot; level, the story and gameplay are detached from each other -- or even in competition. Part of what makes &lt;i&gt;Indigo Prophecy&lt;/i&gt; worth discussing is that some elements are at this level, while others get as close to the playable (micro) story level as anything I&#039;ve seen commercially.

Would you agree with a basic model like this?

Mikael, I have to sign off again, but I&#039;ll try to address some of your thoughts soon.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>breslin, I&#8217;ve been thinking along the lines of a three-level model. </p>
<p>At one level, which is basically an area of active research, the story itself is playable. How you play alters the shape of the story &#8212; on the macro level, micro level, or both. Hitting both is, of course, the <i>Facade</i> goal.</p>
<p>At a level that can be shipped for Christmas, the story is fixed, or has a small number of options &#8212; but gameplay is a close fit with the story. This is the <i>Prince of Persia: The Sands of Time</i> level, and I think it might also be the more successful one you&#8217;re describing in your comment. You&#8217;re playing actions that have significance within the story, not playing the story itself.</p>
<p>At the &#8220;this is a problem&#8221; level, the story and gameplay are detached from each other &#8212; or even in competition. Part of what makes <i>Indigo Prophecy</i> worth discussing is that some elements are at this level, while others get as close to the playable (micro) story level as anything I&#8217;ve seen commercially.</p>
<p>Would you agree with a basic model like this?</p>
<p>Mikael, I have to sign off again, but I&#8217;ll try to address some of your thoughts soon.</p>
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		<title>By: noah</title>
		<link>http://grandtextauto.org/2007/07/17/lessons-of-indigo-prophesy-part-2/comment-page-1/#comment-119514</link>
		<dc:creator>noah</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 17 Jul 2007 16:34:12 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Mike, I think the game is cheap enough now that it might be worth buying just for the first couple scenes. Unless you&#039;re the kind of player that can&#039;t stop until they get to the end, in which case you might want to weigh the choice more carefully. 

Your &quot;Choices III&quot; is an interesting document. Have you used it to analyze any particular games or game designs? 

Perhaps something similar could be developed for story/game integration -- but a central question is the role the story plays in the game. For IP the story is presented as the center of things. This sort of project probably should follow different guidelines than even RPGs like &lt;i&gt;Oblivion&lt;/i&gt; which, while they have (small and large) stories as major elements, have such developed fictional worlds because they&#039;re also encouraging a certain amount of sandbox-style gameplay.

PetitPiteux, this leads into my thoughts about your comment. I think giving players an independently-existing fictional world is one thing. For example, I largely agree with this statement of Cage&#039;s from his &lt;i&gt;Game Developer&lt;/i&gt; postmortem:

&lt;blockquote&gt;
One scene in particular was a veritable revelation for me, the one where Tyler wakes up in his apartment at the start of the game. The player shares in Tyler&#039;s personal life in the morning before he goes to work: showering, getting dressed, drinking coffee, putting on some music, having a serious discussion with his wife, then kissing her before taking his coat and setting out for work.

When I wrote the scene on paper I spent whole nights in a cold sweat: what was the player going to play in the scene? Where were the mechanics, why should such a scene have even the slightest interest in terms of game play?

After months of soul searching I was very surprised when I finally saw the scene assembled, with dialog, animation, music and directing. And to my great surprise, the scene worked. It wasn&#039;t based on the traditional mechanics of video games (objective, obstacle, ramping, reward) but on something else that I still find hard to define.

I believe the scene is based entirely on the interest of sharing in the character&#039;s personal life, developing an attachment for him, becoming slowly immersed in his story.
&lt;/blockquote&gt;

The parts of this scene that work are exactly the ones that are about Tyler&#039;s personal life, especially his interactions with his wife. The ones that don&#039;t work are the ones &quot;based on the traditional mechanics of video games&quot; (e.g., will this improve my mental health meter?). If Cage wanted to make IP a sandbox or simulation game, he didn&#039;t go far enough. If he wanted to make an interactive drama, which is what I suspect, then the quantification elements should have gone away and (if possible) everything playable should have deepened our sense of his history, relationships, and role in the story. 

The same goes for Lucas. When he wakes up in his apartment for the first time, before the premonition, I don&#039;t care a thing about whether he takes a shower. It would have been more effective to leave me, the player, pacing back and forth with nothing to do. But better than that would have been to only place playavble objects around my apartment (like the television and family photo) that, when played, deepen my sense of the fiction. 

Okay, I must go for a bit, but I&#039;ll write more in response to the excellent comments soon...</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Mike, I think the game is cheap enough now that it might be worth buying just for the first couple scenes. Unless you&#8217;re the kind of player that can&#8217;t stop until they get to the end, in which case you might want to weigh the choice more carefully. </p>
<p>Your &#8220;Choices III&#8221; is an interesting document. Have you used it to analyze any particular games or game designs? </p>
<p>Perhaps something similar could be developed for story/game integration &#8212; but a central question is the role the story plays in the game. For IP the story is presented as the center of things. This sort of project probably should follow different guidelines than even RPGs like <i>Oblivion</i> which, while they have (small and large) stories as major elements, have such developed fictional worlds because they&#8217;re also encouraging a certain amount of sandbox-style gameplay.</p>
<p>PetitPiteux, this leads into my thoughts about your comment. I think giving players an independently-existing fictional world is one thing. For example, I largely agree with this statement of Cage&#8217;s from his <i>Game Developer</i> postmortem:</p>
<blockquote><p>
One scene in particular was a veritable revelation for me, the one where Tyler wakes up in his apartment at the start of the game. The player shares in Tyler&#8217;s personal life in the morning before he goes to work: showering, getting dressed, drinking coffee, putting on some music, having a serious discussion with his wife, then kissing her before taking his coat and setting out for work.</p>
<p>When I wrote the scene on paper I spent whole nights in a cold sweat: what was the player going to play in the scene? Where were the mechanics, why should such a scene have even the slightest interest in terms of game play?</p>
<p>After months of soul searching I was very surprised when I finally saw the scene assembled, with dialog, animation, music and directing. And to my great surprise, the scene worked. It wasn&#8217;t based on the traditional mechanics of video games (objective, obstacle, ramping, reward) but on something else that I still find hard to define.</p>
<p>I believe the scene is based entirely on the interest of sharing in the character&#8217;s personal life, developing an attachment for him, becoming slowly immersed in his story.
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<p>The parts of this scene that work are exactly the ones that are about Tyler&#8217;s personal life, especially his interactions with his wife. The ones that don&#8217;t work are the ones &#8220;based on the traditional mechanics of video games&#8221; (e.g., will this improve my mental health meter?). If Cage wanted to make IP a sandbox or simulation game, he didn&#8217;t go far enough. If he wanted to make an interactive drama, which is what I suspect, then the quantification elements should have gone away and (if possible) everything playable should have deepened our sense of his history, relationships, and role in the story. </p>
<p>The same goes for Lucas. When he wakes up in his apartment for the first time, before the premonition, I don&#8217;t care a thing about whether he takes a shower. It would have been more effective to leave me, the player, pacing back and forth with nothing to do. But better than that would have been to only place playavble objects around my apartment (like the television and family photo) that, when played, deepen my sense of the fiction. </p>
<p>Okay, I must go for a bit, but I&#8217;ll write more in response to the excellent comments soon&#8230;</p>
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		<title>By: Mikael Säker</title>
		<link>http://grandtextauto.org/2007/07/17/lessons-of-indigo-prophesy-part-2/comment-page-1/#comment-119512</link>
		<dc:creator>Mikael Säker</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 17 Jul 2007 15:52:24 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>I agree with the complaints about the game superimposing a Simon game over cutscenes. Compare &quot;Indigo Prophecy&quot; game with &quot;God of War&quot; and &quot;Resident Evil 4&quot;, for instance. These two games also feature Simon games, albeit more glorified ones.

In &quot;Indigo Prophecy&quot;, I too experienced that my focus on the Simon game almost completely blocked out the storytelling that took place in the background. That was a bad thing for the narrative scenes but not so much for the action-scenes (more on that below).

In &quot;God of War&quot;, the problem does not occur. The cutscenes you experience (during boss battles) does not convey story but action alone, so it&#039;s not crucial that you seep in everything that happens in detail. For these kinds of scenes it actually feels like it&#039;s good that you don&#039;t pay too much attention to details. When you focus is on spotting pop-up HUD elements you are less keen on spotting glitches in the scenes so your memory of the fights will probably exceed reality. Some of the action-oriented scenes in &quot;Indigo&quot; (the basketball game, for instance) actually worked like that for me.

In &quot;Resident Evil 4&quot;, the cutscenes contained some narrative, but I found myself paying great attention to exactly what went on. There, you never knew when the game would force you to interact. The Simon moments were very sparse, but you could often guess when they were about to appear by the action. In that game, the interaction moment kept me alert. I paid attention and the Simon-game never got in the way.

Still, I think that these are all pretty dull game design choices. To me, this is almost &quot;Dragon&#039;s Lair&quot; all over again... :)</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I agree with the complaints about the game superimposing a Simon game over cutscenes. Compare &#8220;Indigo Prophecy&#8221; game with &#8220;God of War&#8221; and &#8220;Resident Evil 4&#8243;, for instance. These two games also feature Simon games, albeit more glorified ones.</p>
<p>In &#8220;Indigo Prophecy&#8221;, I too experienced that my focus on the Simon game almost completely blocked out the storytelling that took place in the background. That was a bad thing for the narrative scenes but not so much for the action-scenes (more on that below).</p>
<p>In &#8220;God of War&#8221;, the problem does not occur. The cutscenes you experience (during boss battles) does not convey story but action alone, so it&#8217;s not crucial that you seep in everything that happens in detail. For these kinds of scenes it actually feels like it&#8217;s good that you don&#8217;t pay too much attention to details. When you focus is on spotting pop-up HUD elements you are less keen on spotting glitches in the scenes so your memory of the fights will probably exceed reality. Some of the action-oriented scenes in &#8220;Indigo&#8221; (the basketball game, for instance) actually worked like that for me.</p>
<p>In &#8220;Resident Evil 4&#8243;, the cutscenes contained some narrative, but I found myself paying great attention to exactly what went on. There, you never knew when the game would force you to interact. The Simon moments were very sparse, but you could often guess when they were about to appear by the action. In that game, the interaction moment kept me alert. I paid attention and the Simon-game never got in the way.</p>
<p>Still, I think that these are all pretty dull game design choices. To me, this is almost &#8220;Dragon&#8217;s Lair&#8221; all over again&#8230; :)</p>
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		<title>By: breslin</title>
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		<dc:creator>breslin</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 17 Jul 2007 13:24:00 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>I like your formulation (from the beginning of part 1 of this discussion) of good narrative in games: &quot;the story becomes playable, rather than something that happens between moments of play.&quot;

This pairs well with your complaint about the &quot;Simon&quot; game-interface, which enforces an absolute separation of gameplay from story.

In the former case, the story is relegated to mere interruption of the game, as you say; in the latter, story and gameplay occur on irreconcilable levels:

&quot;While some complain that the use of cut scenes relegates story to an interruption of gameplay, surely this is better than placing it in simultaneous competition with challenging gameplay.&quot;

(We&#039;re preferring the former because, though both make the story all but superfluous, interrupted is still better than disrupted.)

My question is this: given these design-dangers, how does one go about matching gameplay and story, so that they neither interrupt or disrupt, but both cooperate simultaneously?

Within the convention of arcade game-design (a propos Simon) where gameplay (interacting with the engine) and story (the narrative significance of the interactions) are distinct, their cooperation is produced, if it is produced, by creative interpretation of game events. In other words, it&#039;s a question of presentation.

As a proud member of the Allied forces, you&#039;re not shooting polygons -- well, you are, but what you&#039;re *really* doing is hunting those damn Coalition fighters. And this one is a slippery bugger!

In a space-shooter, or in a FPS, say, you reach a point -- whew that was close! -- where the mind is working on two levels simultaneously. There&#039;s a part that&#039;s interpreting the action as meaningful, and a part that is overseeing the manual gymnastics with the controller. The former is passively aware of the latter, but in its free time it&#039;s constructing narratives, often ex nihil, but it can be guided by for instance decent backstory, or audio narration, or again creative interpretation.

Whether it&#039;s a training mission with a bunch of targets, or &quot;the base is under attack and you&#039;ve got to hold them off!&quot; with a bunch of enemies -- the material gameplay may be exactly the same. It simply depends, at least for the most part, upon how you present it to the player.

I guess the point boils down to this: what you *are* doing (shooting polygons or whatever) -- that&#039;s what must be reinterpreted, given significance. You can&#039;t superimpose something unrelated on top of it. If you can&#039;t tell a story with Simon, by reinterpreting the gameplay in an interesting way, then you picked the wrong game.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I like your formulation (from the beginning of part 1 of this discussion) of good narrative in games: &#8220;the story becomes playable, rather than something that happens between moments of play.&#8221;</p>
<p>This pairs well with your complaint about the &#8220;Simon&#8221; game-interface, which enforces an absolute separation of gameplay from story.</p>
<p>In the former case, the story is relegated to mere interruption of the game, as you say; in the latter, story and gameplay occur on irreconcilable levels:</p>
<p>&#8220;While some complain that the use of cut scenes relegates story to an interruption of gameplay, surely this is better than placing it in simultaneous competition with challenging gameplay.&#8221;</p>
<p>(We&#8217;re preferring the former because, though both make the story all but superfluous, interrupted is still better than disrupted.)</p>
<p>My question is this: given these design-dangers, how does one go about matching gameplay and story, so that they neither interrupt or disrupt, but both cooperate simultaneously?</p>
<p>Within the convention of arcade game-design (a propos Simon) where gameplay (interacting with the engine) and story (the narrative significance of the interactions) are distinct, their cooperation is produced, if it is produced, by creative interpretation of game events. In other words, it&#8217;s a question of presentation.</p>
<p>As a proud member of the Allied forces, you&#8217;re not shooting polygons &#8212; well, you are, but what you&#8217;re *really* doing is hunting those damn Coalition fighters. And this one is a slippery bugger!</p>
<p>In a space-shooter, or in a FPS, say, you reach a point &#8212; whew that was close! &#8212; where the mind is working on two levels simultaneously. There&#8217;s a part that&#8217;s interpreting the action as meaningful, and a part that is overseeing the manual gymnastics with the controller. The former is passively aware of the latter, but in its free time it&#8217;s constructing narratives, often ex nihil, but it can be guided by for instance decent backstory, or audio narration, or again creative interpretation.</p>
<p>Whether it&#8217;s a training mission with a bunch of targets, or &#8220;the base is under attack and you&#8217;ve got to hold them off!&#8221; with a bunch of enemies &#8212; the material gameplay may be exactly the same. It simply depends, at least for the most part, upon how you present it to the player.</p>
<p>I guess the point boils down to this: what you *are* doing (shooting polygons or whatever) &#8212; that&#8217;s what must be reinterpreted, given significance. You can&#8217;t superimpose something unrelated on top of it. If you can&#8217;t tell a story with Simon, by reinterpreting the gameplay in an interesting way, then you picked the wrong game.</p>
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		<title>By: PetitPiteux</title>
		<link>http://grandtextauto.org/2007/07/17/lessons-of-indigo-prophesy-part-2/comment-page-1/#comment-119488</link>
		<dc:creator>PetitPiteux</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 17 Jul 2007 09:26:21 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>&gt;First, if story is important to a game, do not highlight events through gameplay that are distractions from the story

I am not sure... On the other hand, the story take place in a world, which exist independently from the story, and I think that giving to the player proofs of that, through events and facts not directly related to the story, is somewhat necessary to suspension of disbelief. 
Personally, I liked the boxing or basket game, or some of the more mundane part (getting up, having an argument with girlfriend, having a drink with neighbour etc...) because of its uselessness...

However I agree about the tarot cards, completely useless, and the, huh, suboptimal &#039;directional-input challenges&#039; which drive the attention out of the world and/or the story. It seems they felt that &#039;action-style&#039; gameplay was a necessary evil, even if it do not integrate seamlessly with the world/story.

And the last 1/4 of the scenario was awful, almost ridiculous. But it&#039;s one of the few big game which actually experience smth about story and gameplay. Unlike The longest journey for example, which play exactly the same as any point and click adventure game from the last 20 years...</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>&gt;First, if story is important to a game, do not highlight events through gameplay that are distractions from the story</p>
<p>I am not sure&#8230; On the other hand, the story take place in a world, which exist independently from the story, and I think that giving to the player proofs of that, through events and facts not directly related to the story, is somewhat necessary to suspension of disbelief.<br />
Personally, I liked the boxing or basket game, or some of the more mundane part (getting up, having an argument with girlfriend, having a drink with neighbour etc&#8230;) because of its uselessness&#8230;</p>
<p>However I agree about the tarot cards, completely useless, and the, huh, suboptimal &#8216;directional-input challenges&#8217; which drive the attention out of the world and/or the story. It seems they felt that &#8216;action-style&#8217; gameplay was a necessary evil, even if it do not integrate seamlessly with the world/story.</p>
<p>And the last 1/4 of the scenario was awful, almost ridiculous. But it&#8217;s one of the few big game which actually experience smth about story and gameplay. Unlike The longest journey for example, which play exactly the same as any point and click adventure game from the last 20 years&#8230;</p>
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		<title>By: Mikael Säker</title>
		<link>http://grandtextauto.org/2007/07/17/lessons-of-indigo-prophesy-part-2/comment-page-1/#comment-119484</link>
		<dc:creator>Mikael Säker</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 17 Jul 2007 08:11:11 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>I liked the game although it was riddled with flaws, story-holes and shortcomings. I got a sense, for example, that a few large portions towards the end of the game had to be cut during production.

I wrote a piece on the game a couple of months back that try to highlight some other aspects of the game. You can read it here: http://www.sicher.org/2006/11/15/the-split-personality-of-fahrenheit-indigo-prophecy</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I liked the game although it was riddled with flaws, story-holes and shortcomings. I got a sense, for example, that a few large portions towards the end of the game had to be cut during production.</p>
<p>I wrote a piece on the game a couple of months back that try to highlight some other aspects of the game. You can read it here: <a href="http://www.sicher.org/2006/11/15/the-split-personality-of-fahrenheit-indigo-prophecy" rel="nofollow">http://www.sicher.org/2006/11/15/the-split-personality-of-fahrenheit-indigo-prophecy</a></p>
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		<title>By: Nate</title>
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		<dc:creator>Nate</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 17 Jul 2007 05:56:15 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>haha, you got stuck in the same place i did! (around a year ago) i would love to see more story focused games like IP in the future. i hold high hopes for mass effect on xbox360 for this reason. too bad i don&#039;t on a 360</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>haha, you got stuck in the same place i did! (around a year ago) i would love to see more story focused games like IP in the future. i hold high hopes for mass effect on xbox360 for this reason. too bad i don&#8217;t on a 360</p>
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		<title>By: Mike Rozak</title>
		<link>http://grandtextauto.org/2007/07/17/lessons-of-indigo-prophesy-part-2/comment-page-1/#comment-119471</link>
		<dc:creator>Mike Rozak</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 17 Jul 2007 05:37:50 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Makes me glad that I never bought the game.

The design review made me tangentially think of a list of &quot;rules for choices&quot; that I&#039;ve been gradually expanding: http://www.mxac.com.au/drt/Choices3.htm .

I wonder if an equivalent could be created regarding story/game integration. For example: The sub-games should be chosen to enhance the story, to pull the player into the experience, not merely as a way to slow their progress through the story. Making me play basketball doesn&#039;t make me feel more like a cop. Making me play basketball with DDR footsteps via mouse doesn&#039;t make me feel like I&#039;m playing basketball.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Makes me glad that I never bought the game.</p>
<p>The design review made me tangentially think of a list of &#8220;rules for choices&#8221; that I&#8217;ve been gradually expanding: <a href="http://www.mxac.com.au/drt/Choices3.htm" rel="nofollow">http://www.mxac.com.au/drt/Choices3.htm</a> .</p>
<p>I wonder if an equivalent could be created regarding story/game integration. For example: The sub-games should be chosen to enhance the story, to pull the player into the experience, not merely as a way to slow their progress through the story. Making me play basketball doesn&#8217;t make me feel more like a cop. Making me play basketball with DDR footsteps via mouse doesn&#8217;t make me feel like I&#8217;m playing basketball.</p>
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		<title>By: noah</title>
		<link>http://grandtextauto.org/2007/07/17/lessons-of-indigo-prophesy-part-2/comment-page-1/#comment-119467</link>
		<dc:creator>noah</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 17 Jul 2007 05:05:31 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Oh -- &lt;a href=&quot;http://grandtextauto.org/2007/07/11/lessons-of-indigo-prophesy-part-1/#comment-119445&quot; rel=&quot;nofollow&quot;&gt;Megan&#039;s comment&lt;/a&gt; didn&#039;t make it out of the moderation queue until after I&#039;d written the above. She offers a counter-argument to what I say about the directional-input challenges, one which makes the obvious (so how&#039;d I miss it?) connection to DDR.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Oh &#8212; <a href="http://grandtextauto.org/2007/07/11/lessons-of-indigo-prophesy-part-1/#comment-119445" rel="nofollow">Megan&#8217;s comment</a> didn&#8217;t make it out of the moderation queue until after I&#8217;d written the above. She offers a counter-argument to what I say about the directional-input challenges, one which makes the obvious (so how&#8217;d I miss it?) connection to DDR.</p>
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